Life of a Tree
Entwined with the earth,
Time passes slowly, slowly.
Waiting for the end,
I have seen enough of this world.
Time passes slowly, slowly.
Seasons change, people die.
I have seen enough of this world
By simply sitting, waiting, watching.
Seasons change people die,
But I have endured, lost in time.
By simply sitting, watching, thinking,
I have learned a secret.
I have endured, lost in space,
Nothing knowing me, me on this mountain
But I have learned a secret:
Life is nothing without death.
Nothing knows me on this mountain
But I am forever here, never leaving.
Life is nothing without death
Because how can it be savored?
I am never leaving, forever living
And it saddens me,
Because how can life be savored
If I know it will never end?
It saddens me
To think of tomorrow.
I know life will never end,
So nothing is unique.
Thinking of tomorrow
Is so melancholy.
Nothing is ever unique
If I cannot think of today.
My life is so melancholy.
Everything will happen again,
So I cannot think of today,
Because it means nothing.
Everything will happen again;
I will always laugh again, feel again, love again.
Today means nothing
If there is always tomorrow.















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no man can truthfully say he does not fear death, but one who can face death for honor, duty and the sake of his countrymen...that is a hero.
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Wow. Thanks for the acknowledgement there. -__-;
ANYWAY,
Moving on.
Way to go in breaking the rules.
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Your pantoum really makes one think, and that's great.
Kinda funny but interesting that you wrote this from a tree's PoV [point of view].
By the time you'll probably read this...I likely gave you my actually feedback in class/school.
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